One of the most successful features in Glamour magazine
is the “do’s and don’ts,” where photographs of people in stylish and
not-so-stylish clothing are compared. Why do readers like seeing these
photos? It’s easy to see what a style disaster is when you’re looking at
it, so that’s why I’m taking this approach in advising authors what NOT
to include in a book proposal. There are many tips on what should be
part of a book proposal but I believe authors would benefit from
learning what should not be included in a proposal.
1.Never Say Your Book is Unique and One of a Kind
While
your book may be full of useful information and be well-written,
editors don’t want to hear you insist it’s so special that there is no
other book available on the same topic. When evaluating a proposal,
editors need to see whether similar books have sold well. If you say
there isn’t any other comparable book, the editor will have to do some
research to find related titles. Unless you’re writing a memoir, assume
that there are related titles and spell out how your book differs from
these books. For example, if your book is about 401(k) plans, say your
book will cover strategies for everyone from new employees to retirees.
Explain that your book is more comprehensive or includes real-life
examples but saying that there’s never been a book like yours is not
helpful.
2. Don’t Talk about Launching Marketing Efforts When The Book is Published
Just
a few years ago, authors began marketing books after they were
published. However, in today’s 24/7 competitive arena, marketing is
almost as important as editorial content. You may still be writing your
book but you have to think about marketing well before your book is
published. Never say, “When the book is published, I will start
blogging, Tweeting or design a website…” You need to start building your
community months or even a year before your book’s pub date. Begin
collecting names and email addresses well before your book is completed.
Build up your social media platform (Facebook, Twitter, LinkedIn) so
that your proposal includes a specific bulleted list of metrics such as
FB followers, newsletter subscribers, unique monthly visitors to your
website, a calendar of recent speaking engagements, etc. This detailed
information could persuade a publisher to take on your project.
3.Never Say Your Title or Manuscript is Final
If
you’re self-publishing, you can choose your title and control
everything from content to design. However, if you’re hoping to work
with a larger publisher, you need to be flexible about your title and
content. While you may be certain that your title is persuasive,
publishers have more experience so you shouldn’t say that you’re
unwilling to consider another title. Most editors will try to include
some of your words or phrases but titles change frequently, based on the
development of the manuscript as well as input from marketers and sales
reps. It’s also important that you be receptive to editorial direction.
Editors don’t want to edit or have you rewrite chapters on a whim.
Usually, editorial feedback is designed to improve your manuscript. You
may say that you don’t want to make any changes but if your manuscript
would end up being an 800 page book, chances are your editor will insist
on cutting it down to a more reasonable page count!
4. Don’t Over Promise Endorsements or Publicity Support
If
people have confirmed that they will provide endorsements (back-cover
blurs), include their names in the proposal, especially if the people
are well known. But don’t say that you expect Bill Clinton, Oprah
Winfrey and Stephen King to endorse your book. Endorsements are useful
and most books will have several on the back cover but promising
celebrity endorsements isn’t a smart strategy. Editors probably won’t
believe you and consequently may be skeptical of other promises
contained in your proposal. The same is true of potential media
appearances. Be realistic. If you have appeared on radio or TV, list
the programs in your proposal. There’s a strong possibility that you
will be asked to appear on the programs again to promote your book but
never claim that you have some “in” to a national show unless you have
an email confirmation that can be included in your proposal.
5. Don’t Fudge the Numbers
When
you include information about your background or your previous books,
be truthful. It’s easy to check on sales figures so include accurate
sales data about your other works. If there’s an explanation for a
particularly low sales number, you can include it. Perhaps, you sold
books off your website, rather than having sales go through accounts.
That’s something an editor will want to know. If you haven’t done much
public speaking, don’t say you’re an experienced speaker who has given
keynote addresses. If you have media experience, be prepared to offer
video or a link to a recent appearance. With today’s technology and
available resources making “vetting” easier, honesty is the best policy.
Believe me, I will often Google a prospective author. On several
occasions, I’ve turned down proposals because of concerns, i.e.
complaints about a financial planner or bankruptcy hearings for an
author writing about personal finance!